April also grew up in Crescent City
and now lives with Neal in Los Angeles. The ceremony is over and Neal suggested
to April that they go for a walk along the beach. Neal thinks about how content
he is with his relationship with April; they live together but have never
discussed marriage. He also thinks about the enemies he makes by working with a
non-profit foundation, going into neighborhoods with active street gangs and trying
to convince kids to turn away from gangs. He’s just told April that he doesn’t
want to leave her alone if anything happens to him and she didn’t react the way
he expected.
Damn, she sounded pissed. “I just meant—”She jabbed his chest with a finger. “I know what you meant. Why do so many men think the world revolves around them?”He’d really put his foot in it now. “Hey, I didn’t mean that way, honest, honey.”
Half the fun of SSS is
seeing comments on excerpts of your own work, but the other fun part is seeing
the other snippets. There’s a fair amount of romance in the excerpts though
several are not typical at all! There’s really something to please every
reading taste.
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Oops, he definitely did step in it! Looking forward to seeing how he gets out of it :)
ReplyDeleteThis snippet feels very organic. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteHaha! Neal just did it again. Stepped in a big pile of doodoo. Good visual on the chest with her finger. Hmm, wonder if this is going to get worked out, or escalate?? ;-) Great sic, Owly!
ReplyDeleteOh, poor Neal. His intentions are good. Nice six! :)
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