Somebody knocked then stuck a head inside Neal’s dressing room. “Five minutes,” the roadie shouted over the band’s encore.
Neal nodded and got up from his practice drum kit. How many other guys were lucky enough to wind up with a girlfriend who didn't mind him drumming in the house and learning guitar? She’s got to like what happens tonight, she’s got to.
He took a final swig from the tequila bottle, made sure the ring was inside his shirt pocket, and headed into the hall.
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This is the beginning of a scene I'm playing around with while my Work In Progress is undergoing a renovation. My WIP is categorized as Rock Lit. I don't think the scene will wind up in the story because it takes place years after the planned ending of the story, but you know what they say about best-laid plans. I may post a bit more of the scene for Six Sentence Sunday in the coming weeks.
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Welcome to SSS! Intrigued by his plans and want to know how things turn out. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI like it. With just a few words, you planted that character firmly in my mind. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love this---really makes me wonder about the characters. And I've always wanted to write a story about rock stars. Happy first six!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! Sweet six! I look forward to reading more from your WIP.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! I'm Plange on CC that's been commenting on the SSS thread :) Great 6, I could feel his affection and excitement!
ReplyDeleteYou guys are all so nice! Thanks for the encouragement. I love writing stuff that doesn't have a definite plan to go into the WIP because the pressure's off. Thanks again!!
ReplyDeleteInteresting six! I wonder if she'll say yes.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! :)
Nice! You have a very clear, active, writing voice. :-) Welcome to the Six. I followed so I can find my way back :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely bit of scene setting! see you next week. :D
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! Nice little scene here! I look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteShe sounds very understanding! Must be why she's getting a ring?
Welcome aboard. :-) And I hope that she does like what will happen tonight.
ReplyDeleteI like your six, though I can't shake the feeling that things might not go as well as he hopes.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys!! I missed a week but I'm back on SSS on the 29th.Hope you'll be back :)
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