tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post968408824963694046..comments2023-03-29T08:47:59.677-04:00Comments on Letter Go: Weekend Writing Warriors 10/6/13Owlladyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-8656780612332539402013-10-13T09:35:00.148-04:002013-10-13T09:35:00.148-04:00A great lesson there.
A great lesson there.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-10964999086703811362013-10-08T23:23:49.205-04:002013-10-08T23:23:49.205-04:00Hi Cindy! Thanks so much. There's more messing...Hi Cindy! Thanks so much. There's more messing up to come, because we wouldn't want a boring story ..... insert devil-horned-emoticon here!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-11677367201055541242013-10-08T23:22:16.103-04:002013-10-08T23:22:16.103-04:00Hey there Chelle. He's still finding it a litt...Hey there Chelle. He's still finding it a little hard to let go of the familiar, but slowly, it's coming :)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-79803733592007519902013-10-08T11:00:26.126-04:002013-10-08T11:00:26.126-04:00Neal is evolving. You're doing it at a good pa...Neal is evolving. You're doing it at a good pace too I think. He takes a few steps forward, one back but keeps on going. Despite his self doubt he's determined. Can't help routing for a character like that. Even when he messes up once in a while, we can't help but to pull for him. <br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-45829998161907613352013-10-06T22:49:25.768-04:002013-10-06T22:49:25.768-04:00Nice 8. I like how Neal is still trying to be so h...Nice 8. I like how Neal is still trying to be so hard and street wise and yet he is just a young man who is learning so much about life - and it is not all bad.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-49959024340547228242013-10-06T21:43:51.258-04:002013-10-06T21:43:51.258-04:00Hi Frank. Thanks so much for coming by.Hi Frank. Thanks so much for coming by.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-74928456912130104042013-10-06T21:43:10.102-04:002013-10-06T21:43:10.102-04:00Hey Teresa. Appreciate that.
Maybe, just for the...Hey Teresa. Appreciate that. <br /><br />Maybe, just for the fun of it, I'll post from one of the chapters I've done recently. He's developed some personality issues ;-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-24130667091914992602013-10-06T21:41:33.776-04:002013-10-06T21:41:33.776-04:00Thanks Emelie. Yeah, he's got a lot of learnin...Thanks Emelie. Yeah, he's got a lot of learning to take in. Necessary learning! Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-60926257658421022512013-10-06T21:35:18.503-04:002013-10-06T21:35:18.503-04:00Nice dialog.
Nice 8!Nice dialog.<br />Nice 8!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-22425140318135770982013-10-06T21:29:57.342-04:002013-10-06T21:29:57.342-04:00Hi Susan :) It took some work but I like the scene...Hi Susan :) It took some work but I like the scene too. I think I like this condensed version better, lol! Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-49418731492666932552013-10-06T20:55:18.641-04:002013-10-06T20:55:18.641-04:00I like how Neil still hangs onto that cockiness fr...I like how Neil still hangs onto that cockiness from being part of la familia, yet when he thinks about it, he knows how right the guys are when they tell him something. This is an interesting story, watching Neil evolve from who he was in chapter one, to the "saved" person he's becoming. :-) Nice 8!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-84356183540232064532013-10-06T20:07:44.099-04:002013-10-06T20:07:44.099-04:00Very nice snippet! Neal's learning a lot more ...Very nice snippet! Neal's learning a lot more than just drums which is a good way to show both characters,Emilie Poissenot (Aheila)http://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-55246748380623663512013-10-06T19:52:44.185-04:002013-10-06T19:52:44.185-04:00Lovely snippet - so much in so little and placing ...Lovely snippet - so much in so little and placing in historical context AND realization/character growth too. Very nicely done.Excellent 8!Susan Stuckeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14742093200745409339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-73948543682115374772013-10-06T19:08:14.683-04:002013-10-06T19:08:14.683-04:00How nice of you. There's more of Phil next wee...How nice of you. There's more of Phil next week. I'm trying to come up with a way to bring him back into the story near the end; still working on that. Thanks for stopping by. Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-87120584209764459722013-10-06T19:06:42.862-04:002013-10-06T19:06:42.862-04:00Veronica, I'm pleased & humbled by your co...Veronica, I'm pleased & humbled by your comment. Thanks!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-68088868065377791832013-10-06T19:06:17.920-04:002013-10-06T19:06:17.920-04:00Hi Sue Ann. Thanks for coming by!Hi Sue Ann. Thanks for coming by!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-54755659050778739722013-10-06T15:12:34.390-04:002013-10-06T15:12:34.390-04:00Very well done, can't wait for next week. Grea...Very well done, can't wait for next week. Great snippet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13869179295181139397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-37154838890964741762013-10-06T13:44:35.341-04:002013-10-06T13:44:35.341-04:00Neal's absorbing some good life lessons along ...Neal's absorbing some good life lessons along the way here. I enjoy this story, thanks for letting us have more of Phil. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-2387050167022347792013-10-06T12:46:41.732-04:002013-10-06T12:46:41.732-04:00Nice lesson in body language.Nice lesson in body language.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-16026188011791172042013-10-06T12:08:22.233-04:002013-10-06T12:08:22.233-04:00Aww, thanks so much! :-D Comments like that make m...Aww, thanks so much! :-D Comments like that make my whole week!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-58105212282159625552013-10-06T11:30:54.437-04:002013-10-06T11:30:54.437-04:00'carry yourself like you're worth somethin...'carry yourself like you're worth something'. Perfect lifetime lesson and to read it within this story is way cool. Thank you, my friend. Wonderful.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-29059904689703569432013-10-06T10:40:32.224-04:002013-10-06T10:40:32.224-04:00How sweet of you, J.A. I really appreciate that.How sweet of you, J.A. I really appreciate that.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-61651874134380955682013-10-06T10:39:54.205-04:002013-10-06T10:39:54.205-04:00Yes indeed Linda. That's an ongoing struggle!Yes indeed Linda. That's an ongoing struggle!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-90371379796194544792013-10-06T07:17:25.329-04:002013-10-06T07:17:25.329-04:00Excellent use of the 8's! I love how this sto...Excellent use of the 8's! I love how this story is unfolding. Well doneJ. A. Hornbucklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17052929905955160076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-11875796723033026902013-10-06T07:14:14.917-04:002013-10-06T07:14:14.917-04:00Very good lessons here. Now Neal needs to know how...Very good lessons here. Now Neal needs to know how to be inside what he is supposed to show outside. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.com