tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post8407478722124390197..comments2023-03-29T08:47:59.677-04:00Comments on Letter Go: Weekend Writing Warriors 5/12/13Owlladyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-68967764491991616492013-05-18T00:30:00.791-04:002013-05-18T00:30:00.791-04:00And there goes their opportunity to leave, doesn&#...And there goes their opportunity to leave, doesn't it?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-18440369087539675432013-05-16T16:17:55.970-04:002013-05-16T16:17:55.970-04:00Thanks for the comment on my poetry. But WWW is no...Thanks for the comment on my poetry. But WWW is not a good fit. I’ll be participating with a story this weeksuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-44918025981982616822013-05-15T21:25:06.104-04:002013-05-15T21:25:06.104-04:00You guys are all so nice :-D Thanks so much. You guys are all so nice :-D Thanks so much. Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-27920740765403600822013-05-13T12:02:18.886-04:002013-05-13T12:02:18.886-04:00Oh crap! I wonder how they are going to handle the...Oh crap! I wonder how they are going to handle the gang coming back. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-71704169536925690242013-05-12T16:56:21.893-04:002013-05-12T16:56:21.893-04:00This was a tense moment! When I read it, I worried...This was a tense moment! When I read it, I worried that the gang was going to get back in time to stop Sandy and Razor from escaping. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-54914978769914115392013-05-12T15:04:26.053-04:002013-05-12T15:04:26.053-04:00sounds like could be a good piece of contemporary ...sounds like could be a good piece of contemporary sociology with a positive message. Like his mannerisms - make sure it's not preachy though suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-24588279942055947392013-05-12T14:50:19.195-04:002013-05-12T14:50:19.195-04:00Uh oh. Not good. Nicely done. My heart dropped whe...Uh oh. Not good. Nicely done. My heart dropped when he said that last line.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-87575228911737583372013-05-12T13:48:11.603-04:002013-05-12T13:48:11.603-04:00He better move quickly if he's leaving now. P...He better move quickly if he's leaving now. Probably no time to grab any mementos. Excellent tension.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-73106511851720154602013-05-12T12:44:45.633-04:002013-05-12T12:44:45.633-04:00Kind of you, Veronica. Previous critiquers have he...Kind of you, Veronica. Previous critiquers have helped me improve this part.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-80837423100092422212013-05-12T12:26:51.080-04:002013-05-12T12:26:51.080-04:00Uh oh, the tension just ratcheted up even more wit...Uh oh, the tension just ratcheted up even more with that last bit - excellent excerpt! This story keeps me on the edge of my seat...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-53607255451545302532013-05-12T12:17:12.792-04:002013-05-12T12:17:12.792-04:00heehee! I really appreciate that.
I'm waiting...heehee! I really appreciate that.<br /><br />I'm waiting for that book of yours, woman :-DOwlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-65365738912809072762013-05-12T12:15:39.330-04:002013-05-12T12:15:39.330-04:00Why thank you :-) For some reason it's much ea...Why thank you :-) For some reason it's much easier for me to do that with Razor than with Sandy, but I'm working on it.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-33338417959328833432013-05-12T12:15:32.973-04:002013-05-12T12:15:32.973-04:00What do you mean you pick up the pace after this? ...What do you mean you pick up the pace after this? Heck, I think you did that already as this just adds to the high tension of last week. When I read the last line I thought, oh crap. Great build up here. Can't wait to see what happens next week!<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Writing mysteries</a><br /><br />Ps.. No mine is not HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-70550890465462977882013-05-12T11:08:25.185-04:002013-05-12T11:08:25.185-04:00I really enjoy how much we get to find out about y...I really enjoy how much we get to find out about your characters through their dialogue and speech. That's not an easy thing to do.DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-89002765915479532422013-05-12T11:05:00.134-04:002013-05-12T11:05:00.134-04:00Nice of you to say, Jess. We pick up the pace afte...Nice of you to say, Jess. We pick up the pace after this. Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-26705913396411590812013-05-12T11:03:36.866-04:002013-05-12T11:03:36.866-04:00Thanks so much Debbie! Razor might want a clean br...Thanks so much Debbie! Razor might want a clean break too, but I can't let him off that easy ;-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-83043689382049143612013-05-12T11:00:19.871-04:002013-05-12T11:00:19.871-04:00I love the way you captured the moment of indecisi...I love the way you captured the moment of indecision in this snippet. Compelling snippet!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-32365057229083125582013-05-12T10:38:45.628-04:002013-05-12T10:38:45.628-04:00Uh oh! Sure hope Razor can make a clean break of ...Uh oh! Sure hope Razor can make a clean break of things. This is one helluva good story, Marcia and I'm looking forward to the next instalment.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.com