tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post6749552304578871769..comments2023-03-29T08:47:59.677-04:00Comments on Letter Go: Weekend Writing Warriors 7/21/13Owlladyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-50249503515892777592013-07-23T21:36:22.494-04:002013-07-23T21:36:22.494-04:00I appreciate that Stevie :-)I appreciate that Stevie :-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-9928293424196993242013-07-23T21:35:56.932-04:002013-07-23T21:35:56.932-04:00Thanks Cindy :-) Neal doesn't talk to people w...Thanks Cindy :-) Neal doesn't talk to people when there's a problem so much as challenge them - it's what he's used to. There's a lot of learning that needs to happen on all sides!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-12055369195105716202013-07-22T16:51:11.519-04:002013-07-22T16:51:11.519-04:00Great characterisation in that dialogue.
Great characterisation in that dialogue.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-15230338021943302802013-07-22T03:10:48.447-04:002013-07-22T03:10:48.447-04:00Loved this, "For learning, I watch you. You a...Loved this, "For learning, I watch you. You afraid ’cause you a lousy teacher?” from Neal's character. That really flipped the ball back to the other court. A bit of acceptance and mutual tolerance I see. Great 8!<br />HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-15191873873716590042013-07-21T21:06:32.267-04:002013-07-21T21:06:32.267-04:00Certain characters come naturally to me, is what I...Certain characters come naturally to me, is what I think. You know how it is, a few keep pestering you no matter what you do. You sit down and write about them but that's not enough, they wake you up and interfere when you're trying to go about your daily life, lol! Thanks hon. <br /><br />And glad you like the pic. It's kind of hypnotic, I put it as the background theme on my laptop Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-19493513156432358332013-07-21T21:03:00.767-04:002013-07-21T21:03:00.767-04:00Well, you know, if it was TOO easy, it would be a ...Well, you know, if it was TOO easy, it would be a boring story ! ;-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-74655465846559787862013-07-21T21:01:57.112-04:002013-07-21T21:01:57.112-04:00Point taken, Sue Ann. I think I got too caught up ...Point taken, Sue Ann. I think I got too caught up in sentence counting :D Thanks!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-11592559072590931652013-07-21T15:49:27.174-04:002013-07-21T15:49:27.174-04:00Hey, nice pic ^^^ up top! :-)Hey, nice pic ^^^ up top! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-45053357080593155442013-07-21T15:48:35.937-04:002013-07-21T15:48:35.937-04:00Ohhh, intense exchange!! Excellent, Marcia! lol--y...Ohhh, intense exchange!! Excellent, Marcia! lol--you CAN'T stop being a writer-- judging from your description of Neal in your introduction! It must come naturally to you. :-) Good 8!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-26286129345003733822013-07-21T14:25:05.297-04:002013-07-21T14:25:05.297-04:00Very emotional. I'm glad he's being treat...Very emotional. I'm glad he's being treated like everyone else. Hope they'll accept him.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-38763726857954422462013-07-21T13:27:31.794-04:002013-07-21T13:27:31.794-04:00Lots of hackles raised here. Could I make a sugges...Lots of hackles raised here. Could I make a suggestion? It's not absolutely clear who's speaking in the second sentence--either Eric or Neal could be the subject. Clarify. (Logically, it's Neal, but get the grammar to agree.)Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-10017511457431647832013-07-21T13:10:56.429-04:002013-07-21T13:10:56.429-04:00Thanks Susan. I'm glad you're enjoying the...Thanks Susan. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-89379919123294163582013-07-21T13:10:14.723-04:002013-07-21T13:10:14.723-04:00Well now, that's the six million dollar questi...Well now, that's the six million dollar question, isn't it? I guess you'll have to come back next week!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-50195073941691191502013-07-21T13:08:40.165-04:002013-07-21T13:08:40.165-04:00Thanks for visiting! Eric's got certain baggag...Thanks for visiting! Eric's got certain baggage about street people; that comes out a bit more in the full story.<br /><br />Neal's not the only one who learns things, as time goes along!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-48670267995419443142013-07-21T13:03:25.649-04:002013-07-21T13:03:25.649-04:00Hi Veronica. The full chapter goes more in depth o...Hi Veronica. The full chapter goes more in depth on the band's reactions, showing more of their personalities. But you're right that they eventually (mostly) come around to giving him a chance.<br /><br />But then what?!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-82016788683060584982013-07-21T12:59:27.248-04:002013-07-21T12:59:27.248-04:00Thanks Debbie!
There's finding a place to li...Thanks Debbie! <br /><br />There's finding a place to live, and there's home - are they always the same?<br /><br />;-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-15437910356618380692013-07-21T12:37:26.854-04:002013-07-21T12:37:26.854-04:00Really enjoyed the snippet am also happy that Razo...Really enjoyed the snippet am also happy that Razor/Neal is ok. Looking forward to reading more.Susan Stuckeyhttp://susan-stuckey.storytellersinn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-14547195848359866082013-07-21T11:58:11.717-04:002013-07-21T11:58:11.717-04:00Good job capturing the language of the streets. Wh...Good job capturing the language of the streets. What happens next?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-44379012290320866372013-07-21T11:49:53.102-04:002013-07-21T11:49:53.102-04:00So glad to hear he didn't really hurt himself....So glad to hear he didn't really hurt himself...I sure hope he doesn't touch Eric's crap. I have a lil' suspicion that he may though...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-11583573519208240082013-07-21T11:49:45.375-04:002013-07-21T11:49:45.375-04:00I like Brian's comment because it seems to me ...I like Brian's comment because it seems to me the band members are willing to give this tough-on-the-outside kid a chance. Really enjoying this story, another great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-51957210812017184732013-07-21T01:34:21.862-04:002013-07-21T01:34:21.862-04:00Love the dialogue! You've captured the essenc...Love the dialogue! You've captured the essence of your characters so well. Seems like Neal will find a home with the band after all. :-)Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.com