tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post6581558547008118298..comments2023-03-29T08:47:59.677-04:00Comments on Letter Go: Weekend Writing Warriors 8/11/13Owlladyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-85856748609542180162013-08-13T21:40:25.107-04:002013-08-13T21:40:25.107-04:00How sweet of you Dana. This bit has been condensed...How sweet of you Dana. This bit has been condensed but you know, so often I look at a condensed excerpt and think, Hey that might be more to the point, maybe I should use that in the full scene!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-82226669835361724842013-08-13T07:54:18.417-04:002013-08-13T07:54:18.417-04:00So dark and real, Marcia. I'm amazed at how ev...So dark and real, Marcia. I'm amazed at how even their "banter" is plot-driven in a way that it contributes to the plausibility of the setting and characters. Smart! :) <br /><br />DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-69749622817589430782013-08-11T19:32:49.506-04:002013-08-11T19:32:49.506-04:00Thanks very much Susan, that's humbling and ex...Thanks very much Susan, that's humbling and exciting for me at the same time!<br /><br />I'm dying to introduce Beemer to 8sunday readers. He's a secondary character but I love how he's turning out :D :D <br /><br />Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-51948733049243907422013-08-11T19:30:19.787-04:002013-08-11T19:30:19.787-04:00Hi Elaine. His sense of humor comes out more as he...Hi Elaine. His sense of humor comes out more as he gets to know Sandy better. It's hard to get certain things across in only 8 sentences, lol!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-42920275353651824862013-08-11T19:29:20.202-04:002013-08-11T19:29:20.202-04:00Thanks Stevie!Thanks Stevie!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-4655699202323135772013-08-11T17:47:11.192-04:002013-08-11T17:47:11.192-04:00This is the first time I've read your snippets...This is the first time I've read your snippets, and I find the dialogue very well done... it brings me into a whole new environment for me, Los Angeles in the 80's. I'm very intrigued by the story line and I find myself rooting for Neal, not even knowing him very well yet! Thanks for a great 8!Susan Schilerhttp://teamfamilyonline.com/moonlight-escape-part-8/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-23483263562695836672013-08-11T16:57:20.445-04:002013-08-11T16:57:20.445-04:00So Neal has a sense of humor. Nice. So Neal has a sense of humor. Nice. Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-27767809573820023532013-08-11T15:54:18.818-04:002013-08-11T15:54:18.818-04:00Another excellent eight there.Another excellent eight there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-68153770409961945862013-08-11T13:47:31.948-04:002013-08-11T13:47:31.948-04:00He loosens up as the story goes on, but certain pa...He loosens up as the story goes on, but certain parts of his personality are not submerged easily ;-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-45719179781138075662013-08-11T13:45:51.242-04:002013-08-11T13:45:51.242-04:00Why thanks Jess, that's sweet of you. These gu...Why thanks Jess, that's sweet of you. These guys are a lot of fun to write about.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-81851529646689472882013-08-11T13:42:12.256-04:002013-08-11T13:42:12.256-04:00lol, thanks Veronica! It's especially tough fo...lol, thanks Veronica! It's especially tough for Sandy because he tends to think everybody is honest. As they get to know each other, Neal loves pulling gags on Sandy because he never seems to catch on!Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-1053871728448754692013-08-11T13:35:37.985-04:002013-08-11T13:35:37.985-04:00I'm glad you like it.I'm glad you like it.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-57220869767229051592013-08-11T13:10:19.937-04:002013-08-11T13:10:19.937-04:00Well, good for him! I really enjoyed this little ...Well, good for him! I really enjoyed this little snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-44036515138966346332013-08-11T13:05:42.869-04:002013-08-11T13:05:42.869-04:00Sounds like Neal is torn between his bad-boy perso...Sounds like Neal is torn between his bad-boy persona and reassuring his new "friends."Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-63780863222219212392013-08-11T12:42:15.879-04:002013-08-11T12:42:15.879-04:00Neal is having some fun at Sandy's expense, lo...Neal is having some fun at Sandy's expense, lol. I like it. Good 8, Marcia. I like seeing this side of Neal! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-56096214452856685502013-08-11T12:14:18.373-04:002013-08-11T12:14:18.373-04:00Someone saying they'd killed 14 people would s...Someone saying they'd killed 14 people would scare the heck out of me. Great snippet, Marcia, I always look forward to reading them. Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-42692191329925867552013-08-11T12:00:59.009-04:002013-08-11T12:00:59.009-04:00I like Neal and I can just visualize Sandy trying ...I like Neal and I can just visualize Sandy trying to figure out what's truth and what's teasing. Really a well done snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-7567357816848690122013-08-11T11:51:26.933-04:002013-08-11T11:51:26.933-04:00Hi Millie! Thanks so much. Neal doesn't get th...Hi Millie! Thanks so much. Neal doesn't get the upper hand often in life and can't resist the urge to poke some fun ;-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-58674731536127874272013-08-11T11:31:05.099-04:002013-08-11T11:31:05.099-04:00I really love this conversation...and it brought a...I really love this conversation...and it brought a smile to my face to see Neal sort of joking with Sandy! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-80376462760547049412013-08-11T11:11:21.874-04:002013-08-11T11:11:21.874-04:00Aw Debbie, you warm my heart! :-D :-DAw Debbie, you warm my heart! :-D :-DOwlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-29923450447574993272013-08-11T11:06:35.871-04:002013-08-11T11:06:35.871-04:00Thanks Gemma, I really appreciate that. :-)Thanks Gemma, I really appreciate that. :-)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-80437218837823778182013-08-11T11:04:21.695-04:002013-08-11T11:04:21.695-04:00Interesting that Neil didn't answer the questi...Interesting that Neil didn't answer the question! Looking forward to the next instalment. I would absolutely buy this book. :-)Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-6502212988440249022013-08-11T10:57:59.291-04:002013-08-11T10:57:59.291-04:00Love the voices of the characters, very appropriat...Love the voices of the characters, very appropriate for this kind of story!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.com