tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post6056342028645904636..comments2023-03-29T08:47:59.677-04:00Comments on Letter Go: Weekend Writing Warriors 8/10/14: It's easier if you just disappearOwlladyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-27900216899158084372014-08-13T21:00:20.070-04:002014-08-13T21:00:20.070-04:00Hi Elaine! Yeah it is. She'd been assuming she...Hi Elaine! Yeah it is. She'd been assuming she could still have contact with her family. He was afraid if he told her all of this at once, she'd simply turn him down flat. Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-51390245833340122622014-08-10T22:42:45.509-04:002014-08-10T22:42:45.509-04:00I guess this is more than she bargained for?I guess this is more than she bargained for?Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-4661181856047378492014-08-10T20:24:48.377-04:002014-08-10T20:24:48.377-04:00Sue Ann and Stephanie, thanks for coming by. Kaz i...Sue Ann and Stephanie, thanks for coming by. Kaz is kind of shady but he's a demon, so that comes as second nature :-) <br /><br />Millie, don't worry, it's not you, it's first draft! I clean up some of these snippets and there's *still* stuff like that. So extra eyes are always wonderful. <br /><br />Charmaine, that's what a lot of us would do, I think. But where's Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-18672759255718906072014-08-10T18:37:51.158-04:002014-08-10T18:37:51.158-04:00She just keeps on learning new aspects of what she...She just keeps on learning new aspects of what she's gotten herself into, which I love. Very fresh. Can't wait for more! Great 8...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-71097530723129786012014-08-10T17:10:26.566-04:002014-08-10T17:10:26.566-04:00I like it. I like how she's processing the sit...I like it. I like how she's processing the situation--applying logic--that they don't know if she's alright. And then he adds that last line zinger! All her logic... out the window! :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-33642420339832310842014-08-10T13:29:10.994-04:002014-08-10T13:29:10.994-04:00My favorite line from this snippet is "first ...My favorite line from this snippet is "first responders didn’t need some crazy woman getting in their way." The touch of humor is nice. You're doing great things with this snippet. Good luck with the curtains!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-46693046002044131352014-08-10T12:56:59.455-04:002014-08-10T12:56:59.455-04:00Torn between two worlds, what to do? I say run bac...Torn between two worlds, what to do? I say run back and find her real life. Don't listen to a guy named Kaz. But that's me.My first love's name was Bud. Good eight, my friend.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-44608819512671058972014-08-10T11:29:02.001-04:002014-08-10T11:29:02.001-04:00That Kaz, he's not making a very good case at ...That Kaz, he's not making a very good case at the moment. I don't think I'd just drop my previous life in an instant. The second sentence jars me from the writing....through and though. Maybe reword that. Or, maybe it's just me : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-2609022670539276222014-08-10T10:23:42.787-04:002014-08-10T10:23:42.787-04:00Interesting excerpt. I love the sense of the chara...Interesting excerpt. I love the sense of the characters I get through the dialog here. Kaz definitely seems a tad shady, so I'm anxious to find out if his reasons are justifiable. Great snippet!Stephanie Scotthttp://www.stephscottbooks.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1361240553573022287.post-18506474351168258962014-08-10T01:23:02.529-04:002014-08-10T01:23:02.529-04:00He does have a habit of leaving out important thin...He does have a habit of leaving out important things.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com